Thursday, September 10, 2009
That's true, but I'm not sure it's worth a caption
The article has a photo of a Subway truck on an army base. The caption is:
Look at my revision and tell me if it is any less true:
At the Subway at Joint Base Balad, workers from India and Bangladesh make sandwiches for American soldiers.
Look at my revision and tell me if it is any less true:
At the Subway at 50th and Broadway, workers from India and Bangladesh make sandwiches for American office workers.
